Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Writing 3 Class Notes -- September 27

Greetings!

We had a productive day today. This is a thoughtful group of students, and I'm enjoying walking them through the process of writing their research papers.

We've been working on writing prompts from the SAT and ACT as our Quick Writes. This week we started on a lighter note and played a quick game of Bananagrams. Anything to keep us working with words!

We're also reviewing common problems with grammar that show up on college entrance exams AND in students' writing. Today's topic was pronouns and chosing the correct form according to the case (nominative or objective) needed.

My aim with the students today was to talk over any problems or challenges that they are encountering as they work on their papers. Most of them are having some difficulties with their thesis statements. In these statements, the students are to take a stand on the topic which they have chosen. This can be one of the hardest parts of the paper. One of the next hardest parts is to make sure that all of their points on their outlines and all of their research is related to providing supporting details about the thesis.

Assignments for next week:
-- Rough draft of the introduction for their paper.
-- Outline #2. This outline should be in the following format:
     I. Topic heading
          A. Related sub-topic
          B. Related sub-topic
          C. Related sub-topic.
     II. Topic heading
           A. Related sub-topic
               1. Details
               2. Details
          B. Related sub-topic
          C. Related sub-topic.
     III. Topic heading
               etc.
-- The Related sub-topics should be stated in complete sentences. These will serve as the topic sentences for the paragraphs that contain this information.
-- Continue your research for the various points on your outline. Set your own personal goal regarding how much of the research you need to have done each day/week so that you can begin writing you rough draft. Rough draft #1 is due in 3 weeks.

Have a great week! Enjoy the warm weather.
Tammy Prichard

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Plagiarism

PLAGIARISM

            “Plagiarism” comes from the Latin, plagiarus, which means kidnapper.  In antiquity, plagiarii were pirates who sometimes stole children.  Plagiarism offers the words or ideas of another person as your own.  Plagiarism happens intentionally and accidentally.  Occasionally, a student will take large portions or whole papers and present them as their own.  Most often, however, the student knows the rules and is careless, or he is uninformed regarding proper citing of sources.

            To avoid plagiarism, develop personal notes with your won ideas on a topic.  Discover how you feel about the stand you’ve taken with your subject.  Then, rather than copying sources directly into the content of your research, synthesize the ideas of the authorities with your own thoughts by using the prĂ©cis and paraphrase.  Rethink and consider ideas gathered by your reading, make meaningful connections, and when you refer to a specific source, give it credit.



Checklist for documenting your sources

·        Let a reader know when you begin borrowing from a source by introducing a quotation or paraphrase with the name of the authority.

·        Enclose within quotation marks all quoted materials – a key word, a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph

·        Make certain that paraphrased material has been rewritten into your own style and language.  The simple rearrangement of sentence patterns is unacceptable.

·        Provide specific in-text documentation for each borrowed item.

·        Provide a bibliography entry in the “Works Cited” section.



Forms of plagiarism:  (WWS, p. 29+)

·        Uncited data or information;

·        an uncited idea, whether a specific claim or general concept;

·        an unquoted but verbatim phrase or passage;

·        an uncited structure or organizing strategy;

·        misrepresenting evidence;

·        improper collaboration;

·        dual or overlapping assignments.



Bad ideas and attitudes that promote plagiarism:

·        Start late; adrenalin will get you through.

·        Don’t waste time writing until you know what you want to say.

·        Just skim the assignment prompt; don’t get bogged down in details.

·        Part of the assignment is guessing what our instructor expects.

·        Follow your interest above all.

·        To get the lay of the land, start every paper by doing an internet search of key terms and skimming sources that turn up.

·        Do all your work on-screen, where the action is.

·        When taking notes on sources, just summarize; come up with your own ideas when you’re done.

·        Your paper is your responsibility; hole up and write it.

·        During your initial reading of sources, keeping track of publications information will only slow you down, and you may not even use some of the sources.

·        Compose your paper in the file where you collect your sources and notes, so these can be readily drawn in.

·        Try to sound impressive and sophisticated, like a real scholar.

·        Don’t seek help if you find yourself in a jam; it’s humiliating and will single you out to your instructor as a screw-up.

·        In a pinch, borrow a friend’s paper to inspire you, or borrow some notes to work with.

Citing Sources

When should you cite and why?
1)  Whenever you use factual material – e.g. data, information, testimony, or a report that you found in a source.  You need to make clear to your readers who gathered the information and where to find its original form.

2)  Whenever you use ideas – e.g. claims, interpretations, conclusions, or lines of reasoning arrived at by another person.  Let your readers know that you are summarizing or paraphrasing thoughts formulated by someone else.

3)  Whenever you use a special concept, term, or theory that you found in a source.

4)  Whenever you make use of a source passage’s distinctive structure, organizing strategy or method.  Citing tells your readers that the strategy or method is not yours and allows them to consult its original context.

5)  Whenever you quote verbatim.



Over-citing:

·        frequent citation can weaken a paper by making you seem less thoughtful and too dependent on others

·        citing “common knowledge” or citing inefficiently

·        giving too much rehash of other people’s ideas and need to generate more original ideas of your own



Citing well

·        credits the work of others;

·        respects the scholarship of your readers;

·        shows your respect for your topic;

·        strengthens your paper by displaying intellectual character;

·        establishes you also helpful, honest, open, serious, and careful

·        Intermittent, casual, sloppy, or vague citing raises suspicion and makes your readers skeptical.



Three Basic Principles (for how to use sources)

First Principle:  Use sources as concisely as possible, so your own thinking isn’t crowded out by your presentation of other people’s thinking and your own vice lost in your quoting of other voices.

Second Principle:  Never leave your reader in doubt as to when you are speaking and when you are relying on material from a source.

Third Principle:  Always make clear how each source you introduce into your paper relates to your argument.



Rules for Quoting

·        Quote only what you need or is really striking.

·        Quote verbatim.

·        Construct your own sentence so the quotation fits smoothly into it.

·        Usually announce a quotation in the words preceding it.

·        Choose your announcing verb carefully.

·        Don’t automatically put a comma before a quotation.

·        Put the period or comma ending a sentence or clause after the parenthetical citation.

·        Indicate clearly when you are quoting a passage as you found it quoted in another source.


Writing Notes

Note-taking is the heart of research.  Notes taken for a research paper will fall into the following categories:

·        Personal notes:  expressions of your own ideas and thoughts pertaining to your subject and in response to your reading.  Reflect on findings, make connections, record discoveries, explore another point of view, and identify prevailing views and thoughts

·        Quotations notes:  capture the authoritative voices of the experts on the topic, feature essential statements, offer conflicting points of view, show the dialogue that exists about the topic and prove that your have researched the subject carefully.

  select material that is important and well-phrased; not common knowledge

  use quotation marks

  use exact words

  quote key sentences or short passages, but not whole paragraphs

  quote from both primary and secondary sources

·        Paraphrase notes:  requires you to restate in your won words the thought, meaning, and attitude of someone else.  Paraphrase maintains your voice or style in the paper and helps to avoid endless strings of direct quotations.

            Five rules of paraphrasing:

·        rewrite the original in about the same number of words

·        Provide an in-text citations to the source

·        Retain exceptional words and phrases from the original by enclosing them within quotations marks.

·        Preserve the tone of the original by suggesting moods of satire, anger, humor, etc.

·        Put the original aside while paraphrasing to avoid copying word for word.

·        NOTE:  When readers see an in-text citation bout no quotation marks, they will assume that you are paraphrasing, not quoting.

·        Summary notes:  describes and rewrites the source material without great concern for style or expression.  These notes record material and statistics that have marginal value for your study, which note an interesting position of a source on a related topic, or to reference several works that address the same issue.  Mark in your notes with quotations any key phrasing that you cannot paraphrase.  Provide documentation.

·        PrĂ©cis notes:  requires you to capture in just a few words the ideas of an entire paragraph, section, or chapter.  Condense the original with precision and directness.  Reduce a long paragraph into a sentence, or an article into a paragraph.  Preserve the mood of the original.  Write the prĂ©cis in your own words while retaining key phrases or words.  Provide documentation.

·        Field notes:  charts, notes from experiments, research journals, lab notebooks, and questionnaires.  Interviews require careful-note taking to insure accurate quoting.

Choosing Sources

Sources
A source usually provides one of two things for your research and for your paper:
1)  It provides factual data to interpret and to use as evidence to support your assertions;
       Examples:  exact text of a written, spoken, or visual compositions; statistics or measurements; a summary record of an experience; information.

2)  It provides ideas about data, to build upon or dissent from.
       examples:  a particular claim made by another writer about the topic you are addressing, along with the reasoning that supports the claim; a general concept – a term, theory, or approach that has appeared in discussion of other topics and that you apply to your own.

·        When dealing with factual data:
       stance of acceptance, although you may call into questions the completeness or accuracy of provided facts

·        When dealing with concepts/ideas:
       three basic stances are Yes, No, or Maybe (with conditions)
       you can affirm or reject the ideas of another

·        Use sources in whatever ways are required to make a persuasive case for your way of looking at the material.

·        Make clear what comes from you and what comes from your sources.

Writing 3 Class Notes -- September 20

Greetings!
 
Our Quick Write involved an ACT test prompt. The question dealt with whether conscience or money/fame/power is a more powerful motivator. As a class we brainstormed key points that we would include and how we would organize this essay. I'm hoping these exercises are helpful.
 
Our words for our Vocabulary Building included more words from an SAT guide: autocracy, autonomous, avarice, and benign. Usually we have words with Latin roots, but our first 2 had Greek roots.
 
We spent the bulk of our class time going over a handout that discusses Choosing Sources, Taking Notes, Citing Sources, and Plagiarism. I've had the students read some other sources, but I though we needed to discuss them as a class. The handout is available on Dropbox and as separate entries on the blog.  As I'd written last week, the students should be well on their way with research. Both students and parents should feel free to ask any questions.
 
The students handed in their initial outline. The next draft of their outline is due in two weeks.
 
Have a great week. Work hard!
Tammy Prichard

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Writing 3 Class Notes -- September 13

Greetings!
From my point of view, we had a productive class time. Our Quick Write was a short brainstorming session with an ACT writing prompt concerning dress codes. We took turns contributing and organizing ideas.

Our Vocabulary Building exercise included SAT prep words, a Latin dictionary, a Latin/English derivatives book, and a book of word etymologies. Knowing the roots and derivatives of words often opens up an even wider vocabulary.

Our Grammar Review included sentence fragments, run-on sentences, subject-verb agreement, pronoun-verb agreement, and pronoun-antecedent agreement. Some of this information is helpful for their own writing, and some will aid future testing.

The students should be in the "gathering information" stage of their research paper. We covered what makes a Finding the Best Sources, Evaluating a Source, Preparing an Annotated Bibliography, and Note-Taking. (Please go to the blog for more information and review of the information.)

Next Week's Assignments:
-- An first draft of an outline for the paper.
-- Notecard check. (A check of the students' progress in researching their topic.)

Note
: I had mentioned at the very beginning of the class that most of the work for this class will happen outside of our class periods. Realistically, the students should do about an hour of work a day on this project. This is not something that they should leave until the last minute.

Have a great week!
Tammy Prichard

Note-taking

How you take notes as you do your research is important.  You shouldn't write down every word you read.  Rather, take down pertinent facts in lists or as bullet points.  Don't copy large portions to quote.  Your paper should be in your own voice.
 
As you read, don't pass over information because you're just not sure whether it will be useful.  This is a very common and costly mistake in research. More often than not, you find that the passed-over tidbit is critical to your paper, and then you won't find it again.

Check out these helpful websites:  the Hunter College Reading and Writing Center and the University of Toronto website and from a Lakewood Library

Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Preparing for an Annotated Bibliography

An annotated bibliography is, in essence, a bibliography with notes regarding the usefulness of the book.  The following information should be collected for each book:

Author and/or editors
Pertinent chapters or sections
Title
Editor, translator, or compiler
Edition or Volume
Name of the series
Place, publisher, and date

Do this for each book as you read it.  It's far too hard to go back later to find this information.

Evaluating a Source

With the myriad of books, articles and web sites available, many writers have a hard time narrowing down their options and determining the value of an individual resource.  To save time, readers need to be selective.  Students should be concerned about Relevancy, Authority, Accuracy, and Currency.


Relevancy:  How well will does the book, etc. fit your topic?
Authority:  Are the credentials reputable?  What kind of research has your source done?
Accuracy:  Do the resources verify their own research?
Currency:  Are the resources recent enough for your topic?

Finding the Best Sources

It will be important for the students to find appropriate resources for their topics.  Their own specific topics will help to determine and dictate the sources they will need.  Current events related papers will require up-to-date information.  Primary and secondary sources are both valuable.  Some resources are more valuable and and reliable.

Imagine an inverted pyramid with the most excellent sources at the top and less authoritative ones at the bottom.  As the students compile their materials, they should carefully select good pieces.

Below is a list in descending order, from best to not-as-good, of types of resources:
Scholarly Books
Biographies
Scholarly Articles
Sponsored web site
Interview
Experiment, Test, Observation
Trade Book
Encyclopedia
Popular Magazine
Newspaper
Listserv Posting
Individual web site
Usenet news group posting
Internet chat conversation

The internet supplies both valuable and "sketchy" information.  Here's a checklist for determining the validity of a website:
1.  The site name will reveal a serious and scholarly emphasis.
2.  The sponsor should be an institution or professional organization.
3.  The home page will reveal the nature and purpose of the site.
4.  Author/Sponsor credentials will confirm the serious nature of the site.
5.  Links to other scholarly sites, not commercial sites, will reflect the serious nature of the site.
6.  E-mail to an author or organization offers a means for a scholarly conversation.

Monday, September 12, 2011

Prepositions at the End

Most adults remember few grammar rules.  One that I'm sure will pop up for most is the "never end a sentence with a preposition" rule that they were taught from grade school to high school.  This rule causes you to write stuffy, pedantic sentences that no one would ever say out loud.

I have news of great joy for most of you -- it's OK to plop the occaisional preposition at the end of a sentence!  The Grammar Girl says so; the Phantom Linguist gives us the go-ahead; About.com gives an authoritative "no."


For the sake of argument and vigilance, some still promote keeping those pesky prepositions from the end of sentences because they are a wimpy way to conclude.  Mellanie Spiller seems to be a purists with whom you would need to argue this point.  The good folks at Garden of Phrases equivocate a bit.  And the Answer people at Yahoo even show you how to rewrite a sentence to make it stronger and more effective while keeping that preposition tucked somewhere in the middle.

In my class, I will allow the occaisional preposition to appear at the end.  But be advised that I'm gritting my teeth as I deny the teachings of my elders.

Don't get me started on passive voice ......

Sunday, September 11, 2011

How to End a Sentence

In a conversation with a college-graduated son, we discussed whether it was still necessary to put two spaces after the period at the end of a sentence.

Below are three links to articles about this point of grammar:

About.com and Desktop Publishing

A Slate article

Grammar Girl article


Read the articles and tell me what you think.

Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Writing 3 Class Notes -- September 6

Greetings!

We had a productive class this week.  Sometimes the class right after lunch can be the hardest; a good lunch and a morning of classes are more conducive to naptime than classtime.  But the students in this class engage well with the material and the discussions.

We began with a fun Quick Write using the cards from a game called "Man Bites Dog" in which players are given cards with common words found in newspaper headlines.  The students were to arrange the words into their own headlines and start a short newspaper story to go with it. After a couple of rounds with the cards, we worked on impromptu essays using SAT writing questions.  In the SAT, students have 25 minutes to write an essay. This week I gave the students 10 minutes to outline what they might write in response to the question.  A key skill for students to learn is to think and analyze quickly within a given time constraint.  We'll do a few of these throughout the semester.

After the essays, we did some Vocabulary Building exercises.  Some people can memorize long lists without any trouble.  I find it easier to learn words if I know the roots of the words.  Especially Latin roots.  Also, learning roots opens the door for understanding whole families of words.  This week we looked at caput ("head") and oculis ("eye").

Having a topic and leading questions was the assignment for this week.  We went around the room sharing our topics and getting feedback and suggestions.  A helpful component for this class will be the collaboration and input from the group.  A challenge in writing this paper is developing a thesis.  In other words, the students need to take a stand regarding their topic.  Not only do they need to research and present information, but they need to express it in a way that causes the readers to agree with them. 

We also discussed ways to organize notes.  Some students will prefer notecards, while others may feel more comfortable with loose leaf notebook pages or a spiral notebook.  Whichever they choose, they need to be consistent.

Next Week's Assignments:
-- Read the following articles found in Dropbox or on the blog:
      --  Brainstorming
      --  Argument
      --  Developing a Thesis
      --  How to Write a Thesis Statement
      --  Evaluating Print Sources
--  Firm up the thesis for your paper.  Write it in 1 or 2 sentences.
--  Begin work on your outline.
--  Begin work on your research.

Have a great week!
Mrs. Prichard

Evaluating Print Sources

This handout will discuss strategies to evaluate secondary printed sources—books, journal articles, magazines, etc.—based on three criteria: objectivity, authority, and applicability to your particular assignment. Printed sources, whether primary or secondary, provide the evidence for most of the academic essays you will write in college. Non-print sources, such as webpages, works of art (performance and fine), and interviews often provide significant source material for analysis but are not covered in this handout.

Introduction

At some point in your college career, you will be asked to write a research paper. While you may associate research papers with history or political science classes, the study of most disciplines involves the collection and interpretation of data with the intent of making and supporting an argument. To do this, you must use some printed texts, whether they are primary documents or secondary sources that analyze primary sources.
If you have never written a research paper at the college level, the process may appear daunting. The first step, of course, is to develop a topic that investigates a problem important to your discipline. For this, talk to your instructor or the library Reference staff and check out our handouts on understanding assignments, constructing thesis statements, and argument in academic writing.
So you come up with a good idea and head to the library to begin research. UNC's Davis Library contains over five million books and journals. Which ones are useful to your study? What if the information they present is false, outdated, or biased to the point of inaccuracy? How can you tell? This handout will help answer these questions.
Researchers approach an unfamiliar source and ask questions of it with the intention of discovering clues that will tell them if they can trust the source and if it can add anything to the argument. The steps that are outlined below may appear drawn-out and perfunctory to some; each step is outlined in detail so that both novice and advanced researchers can benefit. It will help you approach your sources more carefully and critically.

Primary and secondary sources

This handout will focus on how to evaluate secondary sources, but the critical skills you learn here will help in analyzing primary sources too. Before we can get to secondary sources, we need to differentiate primary from secondary sources. Primary sources come in various shapes and sizes, and often you have to do a little bit of research about the source to make sure you have correctly identified it.
In a nutshell, a primary source was produced at the same time that the events described in the source took place. Sound easy? In most cases it is. Here are some examples and problem areas:
Diaries and letters written by people who were participants in the actions they describe are easy to classify as primary sources, but what about memoirs or autobiographies? These are usually written well after the events took place and often will tell you more about the period in which they were written than about the period they describe.
What about newspapers? The author of an article presents an interpretation, but if the article reports current events, it is primary. If the article reports past events, it is secondary. Keep in mind that an article about a past event can present valuable primary evidence concerning the author's context.
What about fiction? If you are studying the novel or poem for its own sake, it is a primary source. If you are using the novel or poem as evidence—a historical novel, for example—it is a secondary source. In the same vein, a 19th-century history textbook can be considered a primary source if you are studying how the work was influenced by the period in which it was written or how it fits into a continuum of historical analysis (that is called historiography).
Check out this table to help differentiate primary and secondary sources.
Primary
Secondary
The Tempest by William Shakespeare
An article that analyzes the motif of the 'savage other' in The Tempest.
The Diary of Anne Frank
A book about the Holocaust
The Declaration of Independence
A biography of Thomas Jefferson
Population statistics on Ethiopia from The World Factbook
An article titled "The impact of population growth on infant mortality in Ethiopia."
Secondary sources will inform most of your writing in college. You will often be asked to research your topic using primary sources, but secondary sources will tell you which primary sources you should use and will help you interpret those primary sources. To use them well, however, you need to think critically about them.
There are two parts of a source that you need to analyze: the text itself and the argument within the text.

Evaluating the text

You evaluate a text to determine the objectivity of the author and the credibility of the work. Do not assume that your sole motive or goal is to eliminate sources. While this may be a consequence of your analysis, your goal should be to understand the context of the work so you can assess how it can inform your argument. To do this, you must analyze the text according to three criteria: the author, the publisher, and the date of publication.

Author

Remember back at the beginning of this handout I wrote that critically analyzing sources is all about asking questions? Well, here is where you show off that skill. The next time you pick up a book in the library, look at the author's name. Have you heard of her? Do you know if he is cited in other books on the subject? Has your instructor mentioned the author's name? Is she affiliated with a university (which may or may not add to her authority)? Does the author acknowledge an organizational affiliation? The acknowledgements and preface are good places to get the answers to most of these questions.

Publisher

The questions you will ask about the publisher are similar to those asked about the author. Look in the first few pages of the book for the copyright and publisher information. Did a university press—for example, UNC Press, UT Press—publish the text? Did a popular press—Jones and Bartlett, Harcourt, Brace, Jovanovich—publish it? You can be relatively sure that if a university press published the book, it has been held to a high academic standard. Popular presses differ in their standards. You may have to look at other aspects of the book (see below for tips on identifying tone and audience) or look at other books produced by the same publisher to judge the credibility of the text. Remember, you are not looking for ways to exclude works. Rather, you are trying to understand the context in which the book was written so you can better analyze its content.

Date of Publication

If you are researching a current issue, it stands to reason that you want the most up-to-date sources you can find. If your topic is not so current, it is often acceptable to go back ten or even twenty years for your sources. If there is a more recent book on the same topic, make sure that you look at it. Maybe the author found new evidence that drastically alters the argument of the first book. The age of a work can be easy to determine, but it is sometimes tricky. The page that has all the publisher's information has a copyright date. Has the work been translated? If so, that date is probably the date of the translation. Is there more than one date listed on the page? In that case, you probably have a newer edition. If so, the author wrote most of the book at the time of the first date of publication, although new information may have been added since then.

Objectivity

After analyzing the text, you may find some bias. That does not mean you should discard it. Perhaps the author thanks an anti-homosexual religious organization for funding his research on same-sex marriages. You may be tempted to toss the book aside because you feel that a biased work will not provide the 'facts.' But you may be missing out on some good evidence. No secondary work is going to give you the 'facts.' Secondary sources provide interpretations of primary data. Every interpretation is influenced by the author's context. Find out where the author is coming from and use the evidence accordingly. For example, the book about same-sex marriages funded by the Southern Baptist Convention may provide a clear presentation of the conservative side of the issue. Paired with a book that provides a liberal interpretation, the conservative book may provide valuable information about the various positions within the discussion.

Evaluating an argument

Analyzing the author, publisher, and age of the text provides a good place to start your analysis. You should not stop there, however. You have to move beyond the appraisal of the text and begin to analyze the content. To do this, you can use the same technique of asking questions and searching for responses.

Applicability

Is the work applicable to your study? The first place to look for answers is the table of contents. A book can have a great title but then can be full of tangential ideas or take an approach that simply may not add to your study. The next place to check out is the index. The index is a wonderful resource for researchers. You can use it to quickly jump to particular passages if your topic is well defined. More often, you'll scan the index to get a feel for the authority and scope of the text. Often you can learn most of what a book can tell you by reading the preface and the introduction and scanning the table of contents and index.

Argument

Analyzing the argument gets to the heart of a critical approach to your sources. While this task may seem daunting at first, here are some tips and techniques you can learn to make it a lot easier.
  • Is the information supported by evidence? Take a good look at the footnotes or endnotes. What kinds of sources did the author use? Does the bibliography mention the important books in the field?
  • What is the major claim or thesis of the book or article? Is it clear what the author is trying to prove?
  • What are the primary assumptions on which the author bases the argument's main claim? Do you agree with those assumptions? Is the author taking too much liberty in making those assumptions?
  • Check out the Book Review Index in the Reference section of the library. Read what other scholars have written about this book. Are the reviews generally positive? Do they consider the book useful or important to the field? This is not considered cheating. On the contrary, it will enable you to read the book with your eyes open, so to speak.

Audience

An analysis of the audience can tell you a lot about how much authority a book or article can claim. Most of what you uncovered in your analysis of the text will inform your judgment of the intended audience. You can find out more by looking at how the book is written and what type of format it is written in. Is the work full of technical terms or graphs? Then the audience may be academic. Is the language very simple with lots of pictures? Then the audience may be a younger crowd, or the book may be intended for light reading. If you are reading a newspaper or magazine, look at the advertisements. Who does the publisher hope will read the source? An advertisement for Lexus automobiles or Johnny Walker Red scotch in "Newsweek" may indicate a wealthy, educated (and possibly male) audience. An advertisement in "People" for Tommy Hilfiger or Pepsi may indicate a different audience.

Tone

The tone of a book is how the author represents himself or herself through language. Strong and impassioned language may indicate to you that the author is too emotionally connected to the work to provide an objective analysis. Most academic authors try to appear impartial in their writing by always writing in the third person and staying away from loaded adjectives. Here are some questions you can ask about the author's tone:
  • Does the author's language seem impartial to you? Are wild claims made? Is a lot of emotional language used?
  • Does the author remain focused on the argument? Does he or she jump from point to point without completing any thoughts?
  • Does the author seem objective? Does the information appear to be propaganda to you? Is a specific agenda put forth through the selection of data or the manipulation of evidence? Remember, finding a bias does not necessarily mean you should discard the book. Take it in stride and use it accordingly.

Authority

Answers to all the questions posed above will help you determine whether you can accept a source as an authority. Can you trust it? What can you trust about it? There is no easy way to answer that question, but by carefully approaching both the text and the argument you can feel more confident about the source.

Following the trail

It may happen that you come up with a topic and go to the library to find sources. You sit down with ten books that you gleaned from a keyword search on the library's online catalog. You put all ten books through the critical analysis steps outlined above, and only one fits all your criteria. What do you do now? Go back to the library catalog? Browse the shelves near where you found the first ten? Those methods may work, but a quicker way is to follow the trail of sources in the one book you have decided to use. Look at the footnotes and bibliography. Note titles that the author relies on or refers to as pillars of the discipline. Then look up those book or articles in the library catalog and begin the critical analysis process all over again. This time, however, you know what one author thinks about the book, so it already has achieved a level of authority or importance. Following the trail from one book or article to others can lead to an understanding of the entire structure of the literature on a particular topic.

Apply what you've learned

Now that you know the key terms and what questions to ask, put your newfound knowledge to the test. What questions would you ask of this handout?
  • Is the author an authority?
  • Is the author biased?
  • Can I learn anything from this handout?
How would you go about finding out the answers to these questions? For the first question, go to the UNC Writing Center Homepage. There you will find out who funds the Writing Center and who works there. The answer to the second question is yes, I do have biases, although I am probably not aware of all of them. Do they affect what I write? Of course. Is that necessarily bad? Of course not. The answer to the third question is more difficult. There is no table of contents because this is a short work, but the bold section breaks and bulleted lists should help you scan the document for applicability. Everyone approaches a learning situation from a different angle, and what is useful to one person might not be for the next. That is an assessment you must make from your own perspective.

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How To Write a Thesis Statement

Almost all of us—even if we don’t do it consciously—look early in an essay for a one- or two-sentence condensation of the argument or analysis that is to follow. We refer to that condensation as a thesis statement.

Why Should Your Essay Contain a Thesis Statement?

  • to test your ideas by distilling them into a sentence or two
  • to better organize and develop your argument
  • to provide your reader with a “guide” to your argument
In general, your thesis statement will accomplish these goals if you think of the thesis as the answer to the question your paper explores.


How to Generate a Thesis Statement if the Topic is Assigned

Almost all assignments, no matter how complicated, can be reduced to a single question. Your first step, then, is to distill the assignment into a specific question. For example, if your assignment is, “Write a report to the local school board explaining the potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class,” turn the request into a question like, “What are the potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class?” After you’ve chosen the question your essay will answer, compose one or two complete sentences answering that question.
Q: “What are the potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class?”
A: “The potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class are . . .”
OR
A: “Using computers in a fourth-grade class promises to improve . . .”
The answer to the question is the thesis statement for the essay.

How to Generate a Thesis Statement if the Topic is not Assigned

Even if your assignment doesn’t ask a specific question, your thesis statement still needs to answer a question about the issue you’d like to explore. In this situation, your job is to figure out what question you’d like to write about.
A good thesis statement will usually include the following four attributes:
  • take on a subject upon which reasonable people could disagree
  • deal with a subject that can be adequately treated given the nature of the assignment
  • express one main idea
  • assert your conclusions about a subject
Let’s see how to generate a thesis statement for a social policy paper.
Brainstorm the topic.
Let’s say that your class focuses upon the problems posed by changes in the dietary habits of Americans. You find that you are interested in the amount of sugar Americans consume.

You start out with a thesis statement like this:
Sugar consumption.
This fragment isn’t a thesis statement. Instead, it simply indicates a general subject. Furthermore, your reader doesn’t know what you want to say about sugar consumption.
Narrow the topic.
Your readings about the topic, however, have led you to the conclusion that elementary school children are consuming far more sugar than is healthy.

You change your thesis to look like this:
Reducing sugar consumption by elementary school children.
This fragment not only announces your subject, but it focuses on one segment of the population: elementary school children. Furthermore, it raises a subject upon which reasonable people could disagree, because while most people might agree that children consume more sugar than they used to, not everyone would agree on what should be done or who should do it. You should note that this fragment is not a thesis statement because your reader doesn’t know your conclusions on the topic.
Take a position on the topic.
After reflecting on the topic a little while longer, you decide that what you really want to say about this topic is that something should be done to reduce the amount of sugar these children consume.

You revise your thesis statement to look like this:
More attention should be paid to the food and beverage choices available to elementary school children.
This statement asserts your position, but the terms more attention and food and beverage choices are vague.
Use specific language.
You decide to explain what you mean about food and beverage choices, so you write:

Experts estimate that half of elementary school children consume nine times the recommended daily allowance of sugar.
This statement is specific, but it isn’t a thesis. It merely reports a statistic instead of making an assertion.
Make an assertion based on clearly stated support.
You finally revise your thesis statement one more time to look like this:

Because half of all American elementary school children consume nine times the recommended daily allowance of sugar, schools should be required to replace the beverages in soda machines with healthy alternatives.
Notice how the thesis answers the question, “What should be done to reduce sugar consumption by children, and who should do it?” When you started thinking about the paper, you may not have had a specific question in mind, but as you became more involved in the topic, your ideas became more specific. Your thesis changed to reflect your new insights.

How to Tell a Strong Thesis Statement from a Weak One

1. A strong thesis statement takes some sort of stand.

Remember that your thesis needs to show your conclusions about a subject. For example, if you are writing a paper for a class on fitness, you might be asked to choose a popular weight-loss product to evaluate. Here are two thesis statements:
There are some negative and positive aspects to the Banana Herb Tea Supplement.
This is a weak thesis statement. First, it fails to take a stand. Second, the phrase negative and positive aspects is vague.
Because Banana Herb Tea Supplement promotes rapid weight loss that results in the loss of muscle and lean body mass, it poses a potential danger to customers.
This is a strong thesis because it takes a stand, and because it's specific.

2. A strong thesis statement justifies discussion.

Your thesis should indicate the point of the discussion. If your assignment is to write a paper on kinship systems, using your own family as an example, you might come up with either of these two thesis statements:
My family is an extended family.
This is a weak thesis because it merely states an observation. Your reader won’t be able to tell the point of the statement, and will probably stop reading.
While most American families would view consanguineal marriage as a threat to the nuclear family structure, many Iranian families, like my own, believe that these marriages help reinforce kinship ties in an extended family.
This is a strong thesis because it shows how your experience contradicts a widely-accepted view. A good strategy for creating a strong thesis is to show that the topic is controversial. Readers will be interested in reading the rest of the essay to see how you support your point.

3. A strong thesis statement expresses one main idea.

Readers need to be able to see that your paper has one main point. If your thesis statement expresses more than one idea, then you might confuse your readers about the subject of your paper. For example:
Companies need to exploit the marketing potential of the Internet, and Web pages can provide both advertising and customer support.
This is a weak thesis statement because the reader can’t decide whether the paper is about marketing on the Internet or Web pages. To revise the thesis, the relationship between the two ideas needs to become more clear. One way to revise the thesis would be to write:
Because the Internet is filled with tremendous marketing potential, companies should exploit this potential by using Web pages that offer both advertising and customer support.
This is a strong thesis because it shows that the two ideas are related. Hint: a great many clear and engaging thesis statements contain words like because, since, so, although, unless, and however.

4. A strong thesis statement is specific.

A thesis statement should show exactly what your paper will be about, and will help you keep your paper to a manageable topic. For example, if you're writing a seven-to-ten page paper on hunger, you might say:
World hunger has many causes and effects.
This is a weak thesis statement for two major reasons. First, world hunger can’t be discussed thoroughly in seven to ten pages. Second, many causes and effects is vague. You should be able to identify specific causes and effects. A revised thesis might look like this:
Hunger persists in Glandelinia because jobs are scarce and farming in the infertile soil is rarely profitable.
This is a strong thesis statement because it narrows the subject to a more specific and manageable topic, and it also identifies the specific causes for the existence of hunger
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Developing a Thesis

What is a thesis?

A thesis is the main point of your paper. Everything else in your paper should contribute to explaining and proving the main point. Your thesis may be a single sentence, but it can be much longer. In a large paper, you might need a paragraph or more to state your thesis. A thesis is more specific than either a subject area or a topic. Here are some examples of subjects and topics, and a thesis statement that could be written about one of the topics.
Subject Area
Topic
Homelessness
The causes of homelessness
Northwestern's alcohol policy
Student reactions to NU's alcohol policy
The narrator in Jane Austen's novels
The narrator's stance in Emma

Sample Thesis

Contrary to much public opinion, the growth of the homeless population has not been caused by mass deinstitutionalization of mental patients. Instead, the increase in homelessness has resulted from the combination of two circumstances in the 1980's: the decrease in traditional jobs in industry and destruction of low-income housing.

Why is this a good example of a thesis?

It is specific.

The thesis focuses on two clearly-stated factors of a narrowly defined topic.

It makes an arguable point.

Unless you are writing a factual report, your thesis should make a point that needs to be further proved or explained.

It prepares the reader for more information.

The thesis helps the reader define his or her expectations. From this thesis, a reader could expect to learn more about why these two factors cause homelessness, how they combine, and why the deinstitutionalization of mental patients is not the primary cause.

Does every paper need a thesis?

Yes. Every paper needs a controlling idea that helps you select and organize the details. However, not every paper needs the same kind of thesis. Here is an example of a thesis that summarizes factual information rather than arguing a position:
Users may search the university library's catalog by author, title, subject, or keyword. The keyword function is a new addition to the library catalog that allows the user to search for words or combinations of words appearing anywhere in the book's title. Several specific commands enable users to combine keyword search terms.
This thesis prepares the reader for more information about searching the library catalog using the keyword function. Even though this thesis does not argue a position in the same manner as the previous one, it still organizes and controls the flow of information.

Where does the thesis belong in a paper?

In general, the thesis belongs at the beginning of the paper. If the thesis is at the beginning of a paper, it can set reader expectations and organize the information. Good places for a thesis: the first sentence, the end of the first paragraph, or the end of the opening section.

How do I develop a thesis?

You may find it very valuable to consult with your instructor during the process of formulating a thesis.
  1. Choose your subject area (the professor may choose it for you).
  2. Select a topic (the professor may ask you to write on a specific topic).
  3. Narrow your topic by asking yourself the following questions:
    • What questions in class have interested you the most?
    • What points has the professor made that you found intriguing?
    • Have you uncovered any controversies in the readings?
    • What have you found most surprising about the course material?
  4. Find a question that you want to answer, or a problem you want to solve. Write down as specific an answer as possible and use that answer as a thesis to organize your details.
  5. Assess the thesis you have found:
    • Are these questions and answers relevant to the course material?
    • Am I interested developing and supporting my answer to this question?
    • Will my readers be interested in my answer?
    • Can I find appropriate material to support my answer in the amount of time I have to work on this assignment?
    • Can I ask and answer my question in the number of pages asked for?

 

From thesis to paper

  • Try reading your thesis aloud to a friend.
    • If that person understands what you are talking about and why, your thesis probably makes sense.
  • Try writing an outline of points that might follow logically from your thesis.
    • This may help you figure out how to support the claims or promises of information that you make in your thesis.
  • Write a rough draft to test your main idea.
    • You may discover that your thesis needs to be changed or replaced.
    • If you write an early draft that doesn't stick to the main point you have chosen, it may mean that you really want to write about something else. In that case, change your thesis.
  • Revise your draft to support your thesis.
    • When you are confident your thesis reflects the point you really want to make, review each paragraph of the paper to see how it relates to the thesis.
    • Make an outline of the paper's points and compare it to the thesis. You may decide to add, omit, or rearrange material to make your paper more persuasive and informative.
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