Notes on Final Paper Template

Notes on Final Draft & Grades

Notes for

Class Scores:

Scoring for the class was divided into the following sections:

                70% -- Final paper & presentation  (200 pt)

                10% -- Class participation  (25 pt.)

                20% -- Intermediate assignments (60 pt)

                                20 pt. each rough draft; 10 pt. outline, 10 pt. peer edit

_________ Scores for this class

                Final Paper & Presentation –

                Class Participation –

                Intermediate assignments –

                Final Class Score & Grade –

Research Paper Rubric

Research Paper Rubric

Criterion	Points	Insufficient	Limited	Adequate	Proficient	Exceptional
Format	10	Elements missing; incorrect margins, font, spacing, bibliography, endnotes.  (0 – 2 pt)	Some elements missing; flaws that detract from flow of paper (3 – 4 pt)	All elements present with occasional mistakes (5 – 6 pt)	All elements well-presented and flows smoothly (7 – 8 pt)	All elements thoroughly presented, extremely well-organized, no flaws (9 – 10 pt)
Student Scores
Mechanics	50	Frequent errors, seriously impairs flow & meaning of paper (0 – 9 pt)	Regular errors; flow/meaning of paper breaks down (10 – 19 pt)	Errors noticeable, and occasionally detract from flow or meaning of paper (20 – 29  pt)	Some errors, which are minor in nature and don’t detract from overall meaning of paper (30 – 39 pt)	Essentially faultless; errors may result from risk-taking and do not detract from meaning of paper.  (40 – 50 pt)
Student Scores
Organization	50	Elements missing; minimal organization and lack of flow; understanding seriously impaired (0 – 9 pt)	Regular breaks in organization impede flow and meaning (10 – 19 pt)	Occasional disorganization within paragraphs, but paragraph organization well presented. (20 – 29  pt)	Well organized and flows smoothly; no distractions in organization; (30 – 39 pt)	All sentences and paragraphs flow well; smooth and logical flow; crisp and clear (40 – 50 pt)
Student Scores
Content	50	Little to no examination of data; failure to present relevant information (0 – 9 pt)	Some examination of data; little evaluation of material; little understanding of relevant information (10 – 19 pt)	Adequate understanding and examination of data; some attempts to incorporate material into paper (20 – 29  pt)	Skillful examination shows strong degree of evaluation; strong understanding of various points of argument (30 – 39 pt)	Demonstrates thorough examination of data; shows ability to evaluate; reveals mature insight (40 – 50 pt)
Student Scores
Thesis/Position	15	Position incomplete; support ineffective; explanation minimal (0 – 3 pt)	Positions partially presented; weak information; lack of relevant details. (4 – 6 pt)	Position substantially presented; some imbalance in positions and missing or gaps in explanation.  (7 – 9 pt)	Position completely presented, relevant, accurate, clear and well-explained.   (10 – 12 pt)	All positions thoroughly presented; each point clearly explained; relevant and accurate support of positions (13 – 15 pt)
Student Scores
Presentation	25	Unprepared; unorganized; no eye contact; too casual (0 – 4 pt)	Shared minimal information; occasional eye contact (5 – 9  pt)	Good organization; shared relevant and interested information (10 – 14 pt)	Well-organized; material interests and engages audience; very good eye contact.  (15 – 19 pt)	Flawless presentation; covers key information; confident, engaging (20 – 25 pt)
Student Scores

Total Score – 200 possible points

Writing 3 Final Grades -- General Comments

Greetings!

With one exception, I have sent out the grades for the papers and the Writing 3 class.  As you can see from the page of notes, I divided the scoring into sections:  Final Paper, Presentation; Class Participation; and Intermediate Assignments.  The rubric attached to you earlier e-mail explains the scoring for the individual papers.  If you've had other classes from me, you'll know that I tend to be an easy grader and put a lot more emphasis on the process.  Percentages and grades are only one small indicator of a students academic progress.  Please contact me if you have any questions.

I'm so proud of the work that the students did for this class.  Even though it was after lunch, they stayed engaged with our grammar discussions, explanations about the process for the paper, and SAT writing exercises.  They all confessed to doing a bit of procrastinating; nevertheless, it is obvious that they worked hard and were diligent students.

I must say that I'm sad that this class has come to an end. Weekly, I looked forward to this class and the opportunity to engage this group in thoughtful discussions. I've had a majority of these students in other classes, and it has been a pleasure to watch them grow to be skilled and talented writers.  I feel that as a students (and as a teacher) we've accomplished good things!

God's best to all of you -- keep up the good work!

Mrs. Prichard

PS.  I still have room in the British Lit class and would love to have any of these bright students join me!